critical feedback, blended (could have used dry brush) the color on the bowl, looks like a black and white globe
Illusion of volume & depth: positive feedback, looks like individual strands in the "reeds", nice texture wrinkly looking on the bag
critical feedback, mugs look a little wide, spout is going straight up, more shadow on the paper is sticking up
Composition choices: positive feedback, nothing looks bare, good use of the foreground and background
--> paper roll jar... etc. front then back very full
critical feedback, paper looks like it is sticking out
PROGRESS: "sooooooooo much better"- Brooke
-Better coloring in the last painting.
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